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删除1,484字节2019年9月19日 (四) 01:03
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我是按我们Ballance吧的标准来评价这张图的,然而由于中国Ballance制图始于2008年,已历经十余载的发展,因此Ballance制图新人的作品很难达到我们现在对“优秀制图作品”的评判标准。但是也请作者不要因此灰心,毕竟你是目前已知的第一位发布过完整自制地图的外国制图者。同时也因此,我只能把这张图和中国制图者早期的作品相比了。
从整体设计上说,此图构造精美考究而几乎没有欲死不能之类的漏洞,这一点比中国的很多新人作品要强; 从细节做工来讲,虽然比中国的早期自制图要好,但在现在来看精度还是略有欠缺,例如路面钢轨对齐不够准,以及地图文件中有大量无用贴图等等占据不必要的内存。不过这一方面相对来讲要容易提升得多。 | content = So I just tried the level and here are my feedbacks or reviews (on the standards in our Chinese forum, and something bad is that the standards, or the definition of “fine works” are really difficult to reach for new mappers as the custom mapping has been started since 2008, but '''don't be discouraged'''; since you're the first non-Chinese person to release a completed custom level, I can only compare it with earlier Chinese levels):我是按我们Ballance吧的标准来评价这张图的,然而由于中国Ballance制图始于2008年,已历经十余载的发展,因此Ballance制图新人的作品很难达到我们现在对“优秀制图作品”的评判标准。但是也请作者不要因此灰心,毕竟你是目前已知的第一位发布过完整自制地图的外国制图者。同时也因此,我只能把这张图和中国制图者早期的作品相比了。 <ins>1. On the general designs of this level: </ins> Really exquisite and creative design with almost no flaws, '''better than most new Chinese mappers'''. {{Resize|''Some explanations: for example, sometimes when you die (which means that your ball falls and touches the death zone, or the depth test cubes and is reseted to the checkpoints), you find your can't get the correct type of ball to pass the level; when you get stucked at someplace and can't move or die, only to restart the level. These are called flaws in mapping. ''}} <ins>2. On the minutiae of this level: </ins> Sadly the minutiae of this level still can't reach the common standards in Chinese forums, although '''already better than most levels of Chinese mappers'''. But it's easy to improve. {{Resize|''Some explanations: the minutiae are, for example, the precise matching up and aligning of floors (rails, and their textures) and modules, the hitting and rolling sounds of floors and rails, the disposing of unused and useless objects and components, etc.''}}从整体设计上说,此图构造精美考究,而没有欲死不能之类的大漏洞,这一点比中国的很多新人作品要强;而从细节做工来讲,虽然比中国的早期自制图要好,但在现在来看精度还是略有欠缺,例如路面钢轨对齐不够准,以及地图文件中有大量无用贴图等等占据不必要的内存。不过这一方面相对来讲要容易提升得多。
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